By the mossy green well

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Once upon a time, there was a little boy and his sister. They were very close to each other, maybe because they were close in age, or maybe because they shared the same chores around the rambling household.

They had to be up before dawn to draw water from the mossy fern-lined well near the paddy fields. He would run along the mud banks criss-crossing the paddy fields in his valli-nikkar (suspenders of sorts) with a "Brrrrrrr......." emanating from his pursed lips, imitating an engine. She would traipse along behind.....with pot-fuls of water swinging from her dark lanky arms.

Then there was the mad rush back to freshen up and race to school. They would squat cross-legged on the ground and trace the alphabets on the sand. Whenever he got caught for some childish misdemeanor, she would watch from afar, eyes scrunched, as acha rained sharp smacks on his hand with a thin branch broken off the kilichundan maavu that grew on the outskirts of the compound.

Then, life intervened....seventy years of it...universities, spouses, children, homes, careers, egos, cold wars.....and they drifted apart....

Today, she is dying. And he is by her side.

Cold wars forgotten
Bruised egos forgotten
Broken promises forgotten

He slipped into the darkened room, sat by her bedside and held her hands. She looked up, a weak smile weaving through her bloated features...eyes misted over...and, once again, it was just the little boy and his sister, by the mossy green well.

Comments

  1. that was so sad and so sweet ganga. hmmm...wish i had a brother all over again now!

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  2. Yes, it is a touching story. And thanks for dropping by, Abhilash!

    Yes Arch, it's a blessing to have bonds that run so deep...at least it brought them back together even though they let so many years slip by....

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  3. Sounds so familiar. Well written!

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  4. So beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time! Also very true. I agree with Shail, a very familiar scene. I wonder how siblings who have shared the most joyful and carefree part of their lives together can drift apart so much.

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  5. Siblings just bond anyway anytime...
    Ashes

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  6. Pain,love &nostalgia...
    nice post
    touching..
    cheers

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  7. Shail, thank you!

    Dreamer, I wonder too...but it happens all the time around us, doesn't it? Perhaps childhood bonds often don't translate well into adulthood? Maybe they drift apart because they are best apart?

    Ashes, that's what I'd love to believe in...like the little boy and his sister in the story.

    Man in painting, welcome back and thank you...glad you liked it :)

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  8. A well wisherNovember 10, 2009

    Nice story... Life is only once for everyone, so either it is brother or sister, parents or children or any close relationship should forget all cold wars, ego and try to live happily for the rest of their life.

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  9. Oh Ganga, this was one of the very best flash fiction I've ever read. Absolutely touching, with a fairy tale like touch to it.

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  10. Awww. that was really touching.. soft .. and mellow.. i guess.. thats what relationships are all about..

    Work from home India

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  11. Dear well wisher, well said!

    Thanks, Pals :)

    Workhard, welcome here! glad u liked it :) u put it so nicely - relationships are soft and mellow, and need to be cared for oh so preciously

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  12. quite touching! though it may seem that the pace of life has changed the childhood equation, strong bonds remain till the end. People may get busy, avoid childhood relationships due to pressures, BUT deep down in their hearts the bonding remains, and nothing can change it.."If you really love someone, let them go - if they come back, they are yours.If they dont, maybe they never meant to be!"

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  13. Love that, Vanitha!!! I suppose if they don't come back, one should just swallow and carry on with life?

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